The Pleiades by corinazone.deviantart.com
| July 9, 2018

Venus

Sometimes at night, I sit out on the porch.

If there’s rain, I watch the fat drops

making crystal crowns

at my feet.

If the sky is ebony

and the stars have abandoned the sliver of a moon,

I watch it, marveling at the silver crescent I see

and imagining the rest, hiding in plain sight.

If I’m lucky,

the Constellations come out to play.

I squint at the sky

finding the ones my mother taught me.

The Dipper, just like the blue speckled one that hung

in my grandma’s kitchen.

We lifted it from the nail on the wall and drank deeply,

never worrying about who had a cold or who’d

washed their hands.

Only that we returned it to its rightful place.

There’s Orion the Hunter, his belt buckled tight,

his bow at the ready,

relentlessly stalking the Pleiades,

those seven beauties leaping across the heavens

ever out of his grasp.

Keep dancing, girls. He’s no match for you.

It’s late but I stay, pulling my bathrobe closer.

Then I see her: Venus.

Not just a star, but a planet in her own right.

The only one named for a woman

and what a woman at that!

the color of burnished coals.

Damn, isn’t she something?

Look! my mother would say.

Isn’t it a wonder?

All that going on up there

while we’re way down here?

Yes, I say to the sky. Yes and yes.

Susan Frederick is a third generation Washington native and a UW graduate.

SHARING STORIES is a weekly column for and about the 50 plus crowd living in the Puget Sound region. Send your stories and photos to ariele@comcast.net. Tell local or personal stories; discuss concerns around aging and other issues; share solutions, good luck, and reasons to celebrate; poems are fine too. Pieces may be edited or excerpted. We reserve the right to select among pieces. Photos are always a plus and a one-sentence bio is requested (where you live, maybe age or career, retired status, etc.).

SHARING STORIES is featured on http://www.northwestprimetime.com, the website for Northwest Prime Time, a monthly publication for baby boomers, seniors, retirees, and those contemplating retirement. The newspaper can be found in the greater Seattle area and other Puget Sound locations. For more information, call 206-824-8600 or visit http://www.northwestprimetime.com. To find other SHARING STORIES articles on this website type “sharing stories” in the search function above.

Share this story!
Ghosted
"Tommy’s old bedroom"...
Old Lady Babies
"Old lady babies were older women who dressed like teenagers."...

Related

The Year That Changed Everthing
It was like someone had flipped a switch. I realized I hadn’t lost my life, my family or my friends. I was alive, and I...
14 Rural WA Hospitals Deemed at Risk of Closure from Medicaid Cuts
In Washington, 14 hospitals were included on the list of at-risk hospitals, nine of them in the 4th Congressional District in Central Washington. In total,...
The Cloud
Feeling like you’ve got my back enabled me to tackle “the cloud” today....
Scott Murdock: 4,760 hours of volunteering for parks
To Murdock, it’s just a part of something he’s done ever since he retired: giving back...
For older renters, Western WA’s housing boom can sow insecurity
After three forced moves, with a fourth on the horizon, the threat of homelessness looms for one couple amid a daunting housing market...
Reflections on Title IX
The 40th anniversary of Title IX—landmark legislation banning sex discrimination against women in academics and athletics—is being celebrated this year...

BE IN THE KNOW

NWPT-Subscribe

Recent Posts

Seattle Senior Resource Fair
Pick a peck of purple pickled onions
A New Lens on Dementia Care
Sent Across the Nation
Enjoy a Door County Tradition When You Experience a Fish Boil

BE IN THE KNOW

NWPT-Subscribe

Recent Posts

Seattle Senior Resource Fair
Pick a peck of purple pickled onions
A New Lens on Dementia Care
Sent Across the Nation
Enjoy a Door County Tradition When You Experience a Fish Boil